Hey there

I found this really nice render not long ago, and i decided to give a try to "sad-miss-you" themed avatar. Here are my tries so far



Seems nice so far, however there are few things of which id love to ask your opinion on:

1) Picture seems a bit dull, any ideas how to liven it upa bit?
2) Text seems to be out-of-picture, any advices?

Edit: Typos

Here's a quick animation with a simple transition effect added in Windows Movie Maker.



That might give you some ideas.

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@Adrenaline: Ahh, thats perfect font! Is it custom, or did you just change some settings?

its tempus sans itc

for color i would suggest filing a new layer with blue or some other color then set to overlay or soft light. Then simply erase around the render. Or you could try a cooling effect or warming or some other or color balance. Look at image > adjustmants... it does wonders .

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